All Comments on 'Taking Elaine: Day 02'

Keep going please

I love the update, and I love how he got almost complete control over her please update soon.

Love this. So amazing. I wish I could be controlled like that. So sexy :)

I absolutely adore your stories! They are so well writen and intensely, almost overwhelmingly (but in a good way) erotic! You truly bring your characters to life!

It may be a strange thing to say, but this is so utterly romantic, especially the last scene. And this is only day two. I shivered as she signed her life away - no, she did not sign her life away, she signed ownership away, her life could only improve - a big step, after only two days, but so natural. And you write it so beautiful, so credible, so desirable even. Love it, thank you.