All Comments on 'Taking Fiona'

This was a very original handling of a pretty common theme. Nicely done!

It would have been nice for anyone else she had "danced" with that night to come into the bathroom with her.

A very well written piece of work.

You did an excellent job of filling out the character, describing her motivations and emotions.

The description of the scene was nicely done, easy to visualise.

Well done.

Well written first submission, I liked it just the way it was.

Bitch needed what she got. Love me a redhead!

No matter how you try to justify it.