All Comments on 'Taking Her Home'

This was really hot. Just the right amount of plot exposition and good sex. As someone who is into piss, I really enjoyed this! It's nice seeing a story that softcore includes a kink, but isn't all about it.

Two beautiful people enjoying each other completely. I hope you write more, you have a great way with words and a hot imagination!

Wow, thanks for all the support! This went much better than I'd even hoped. Sorry for this who weren't expecting piss, I tagged it but never mentioned it until it appeared in the story. Also, my favorite quote that I just made up: "The hardest part about writing lesbian erotica is finding a way to distinguish between the two that is both clear and unrepetitive." I can't use pronouns, because they're both she!

Oh God I loved that, could really feel the excitement and arousal with this one God it had me going ;)