by FranklenStein
Very well written, I hope you'll write more and longer stories. I'd love to know more about what happened later... as in days and weeks later.
One of the more elegant pieces of writing I have seen lately. Keeps the "Lit" in Literotica.
Very Hot!
I'm about to buy a bike and I think this just became my new fantasy!
Well written with very few errors as well.
This story has the kind of ring of truth and intimacy to it that I always look for and almost never find. I almost feel like this happened to me and one of my old friends. Btw, this is the first comment I've ever left.