All Comments on 'Taking Stock'

This, of course, needs a sequel. You can't let Grumpy the Grandfather get away with nicking his own son's wet dream. No Sir!

This was amazingly well done. Chapter 2?!

I got the feeling she had sex once or twice and then i read about naidenhood whhich means virgin.... can you clarify?

This braids together eroticism with great writing talent, neither giving way to the other. Excellent hook at the beginning and a wonderful ending providing closure but room for more. Nice.