All Comments on 'Tale of Obsession: Courting Daphne Ch. 08'

by silver_firefly

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caronmcaronmover 13 years ago
Great Follow Up

Enjoyed this as much as the others was worth the wait. Hope you have time to do Chapter 9.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

i read the original chapter 8 , and i must apologise in advance cos i am so glad it got deleted n ur writing this one. this chapter was awesome! im so glad ur carrying on with the story, as in the previous one there were too many unanswered questions. can wait for leander to confess his love for daphne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Disappointed

The story started off with such promise, but you lost me. The plot was stalled with gratuitous sex that made no sense in the context. It just became frustrating and I found myself scrolling through to catch a thread of the plot to carry me forward. You're a marvelous writer, but this one just became an exercise in frustration.

spearishspearishabout 11 years ago
Great writing !

I don't agree with the previous poster .I'm loving how you capture the depth of feeling between them and yet subtly move the plot forward .Each to his own I guess .

Absinth3Absinth3about 8 years ago
I don't agree with "Disappointed" either ...

Chapter by chapter, it gets better and better

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
UTTERLEY BRILLIANT!

Oh my god this story is so fantastic it must reach a conclusion!

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