All Comments on 'Tale of Obsession: Courting Daphne Ch. 11'

Was worth the wait for the ending - or is there another chapter??

Have enjoyed this series, keep on writing

I can't believe I haven't read this story before! It's amazing, I loved it! the characters and the way the develop through out the story is so well writen, you are truly tallented.

I hope you will write another story, perhaps about Anthony? I fell so sad for him that he lost his love.

Thanks for a great story!

I throughly your story of Leander and Daphne and look forward to hopefully to be able to read more of your work. Well done!

While some of the erotic parts of this story were interesting, the rest of it was so disjointed and random that it should have been left out entirely. Many paragraphs were devoted to introducing plots that were never fleshed out. It's as though you started this story without having any idea what it was actually going to be about. There are also issues with your use of the tense. You switch back and forth, sometimes even in the same sentence. This story does have potential, but it needs some heavy editing.

happily ever after!💫

Excellent story. Very well written. Perfect mix of romance and erotica. Please continue writing.