All Comments on 'Tales from the Ethereal Space Ch. 02'

by RockmeHard1234

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cummer_elitecummer_eliteover 5 years ago
Confused

I just don't get how is Zachery a supersoldier,although as it is mentioned that he is avoiding both the empires,he might have some secret..

Although the story is not continued,the plot was good,you could have easily taken it further,like creating a harem,dominating the alfar empire by some superpower he has etc etc...

TIGERWOLFSTORMTIGERWOLFSTORMover 5 years ago
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Please write more of this one i like so far .. why start a story if your only going to leave it hanging?

KerrionKerrion5 months ago

Why is it that so many authors start interesting stories, only to abandon them? Then leave them posted for people to start reading, knowing that it's not finished?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Good start--- but where's the rest???

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