All Comments on 'Tales from the Guilds Ch. 04'

I like the latest character in the series. Not fond of the "footnotes" as they are distracting from the flow of the story. Based on other reactions I gather Terry Prachett did that also, so I can't say much, but I don't like them.

Thanks, Bear.

A well-told tale of some simplicity and a jolly good read.

HP

Well done.

With the exception of the fore-referenced excess of footnotes, I think your variant on Sir Terry’s narrative voice is excellent.

Thank you for sharing it!c

Gets the feel well, I have started looking forwards to each new one.

Apropos the footnotes - good effort. Italics works well but I would suggest space them out more. I understand about getting them on the same page, but feel perhaps they are too immediate. But it's your story and you're doing a great job so far, so just ignore me.

Please keep the Tales from the Guilds going! It's terrific!