by voluptuary_manque
This chapter jumped from vignette to vignette too much for my taste. While having each chapter be different was ok, this one made me feel like I was reading the fantasy equivalent of Headline News. Still enjoyable though.
Well done on putting your own take on Disc World, could only be better with longer and more frequent chapters.
I echo a previous comment; longer chapters, more frequently, pretty please! I'm a greedy girl & want more of your yummy stories. You do them so well!