All Comments on 'Tales From The Psych Ward 01: Of One Mind'

by The_Technician

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Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 11 years ago
View of a nightmare

The faint disjointed tale from the perspective of a person with this disorder unfortunately makes sense. I know someone with this problem and you never know who will come to visit. Thanks for sharing

mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 11 years ago
Intriguing

A strange and rather uncomfortable story with an awful lot left unsaid. I look forward to seeing where this might go.

Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us in this story.

emrldtricaemrldtricaover 11 years ago

Great story idea. I'm not sure if the main character is male or female, though. I think this will make a great series.

eWomaneWomanover 11 years ago
Curious...

I agree with those who are curious to see where this goes...having my share of psychological diagnoses, I can't help but be intrigued. You've set a high bar. You write well, good pace (please stick to 1 or maybe 2 pages per parts), and, as previously said, character development is important (really appreciate the previous comment about male/female...so interesting to consider)...good copy editing...so yes, keep it cumming...thanks for an interesting read...hcl

PoesproppiePoesproppieabout 4 years ago

Wow a different perspective on a very real problem...... a full 5 from me

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I was born in the Midwest, but have traveled extensively throughout the United States and Canada. Currently I am full-time camping throughout the United States and Canada and spending my time writing for both fun and profit. Books with longer stories such as the kind posted on...