by Andyhm
I truly love your writing! Oh sure, there are the usual typos, misspellings or misused words but nothing really detracting. I especially like your mix of sex and other aspects of the story which makes it really interesting. I never thought I would be saying this, but, after all, one can get bored reading the same old sex accounts. The all abiding "love" prevailing in your story maybe should include some "man on man" action in your MMF accounts. I would also like to see some incestuous interaction. i believe you are leading up to that with Andy and Kirsten. I am 73 years old and I am proud to be seen as a "Dirty Old Man" and I will go to my grave being one. I've devoted my life to learning to be one. I love you all.
Absolutely perfect. A marvellous romantic story with perfect sex
It just gets better and better. Great story fantastic sex. Pure escapism. I love it. Each chapter gets five stars from me.
"The walls of her cunt rippling before squeezing tight against my ridged cock. . . "
Rigid?
The small handful of us that bother to comment are in agreement to the value of the story.
I too have given each chapter a five. You hooked me in Ch1.
This is the best story that I read on this medium, by far! It deserves to be published in book form.