by Andyhm
Please make the time short, this time please. This was one of the best of chapters. I hope that everything backfires on Bernard.
... please don't spoil it by leaving us with a cliff hanger like this for too long. I hope that the body is Bernard, but of course the other possibility is Lisette.
Keep us waiting tooooo long!
Seriously I like many others love this tale.
I read all of the older version of this story, but I lked this one better. It has more humanity in it. The humor is a delightful touch too. There is a ton more to this story and I have to be in suspense until the mext 18 chapters are written, darn it.
OK, you have moved past a May/December romance, with extra benefits, into a possible murder thriller! You can't make people wait weeks or months for another chapter!
Get busy and write, please!