All Comments on 'Tales of Haze 02: Police Mentality'

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jayaurysmut almost 5 years agoAuthor

This one was fun to write, and I always wonder why this kind of interrogation isn't too common in mind control fiction. It seems perfect. If you liked this, check out my stuff on amazon. I just put up a nice big smutty scifi CYOA.

GigglingGoblin almost 5 years ago

Wonderful Pacing

This was lovely! There aren't enough male bimbo stories, and I loved how you wrote his rapid descent. I've got a problem, though - one of my stories has a domme also named "Poppy", though she's in the medical industry instead of law enforcement!

rogueKlyntar over 1 year ago

One-way ticket to Haze plz, I'm gonna start a life of crime.

Funnily enough, GigglingGoblin, I just commented a moment ago in another of jayaurysmut's stories that his stories remind me of yours; I also remembered your Poppy immediately when reading this story!

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