All Comments on 'Tales of Lustville Scene 07'

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sali6435sali6435over 6 years ago
ruined this one

at least for me, started going down hill when they swapped partners for the party now you got the mom's cheating on thier sons. as well as needing an editor really bad to many contextual errors.

this story started great but degenerated fast into sleezy crap.

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