All Comments on 'Talia Steals the Show'

I think it would still be interesting to see the original and longer treatment you mentioned. It would give us more time to get to appreciate the characters and the setting and perhaps add a further dimension to the erotic proceedings when they do come around.

That said, I'm not typically a fan of either shemales or "painal" and this story was still well-written enough to keep me reading, so you obviously did something right. I think you did a solid job of bringing out Saniya's character in particular. Good work.