All Comments on 'Tali's First Job Ch. 02'

You write very hot and compelling sex scenes. Tali was just a tad less hyper here which made her more easy to relate to and more interesting. I'd like to see Molly fleshed out and have an actual lesbian relationship be cultivated rather than just a staged one. But you are the author. Surprise me. I also see you've taken the editing comments on the first installment to heart. This one is cleaner and flows much better. Most of all it made me wet.

xoxo,

Di