All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 08'

Appendices are excellent. They will help me alot.

I actually wrote it a while back and tried to submit it as a separate entry, but it was rejected.

When you went looking for hard core erotica, did you ever think that that would mean, "so complicated it needed a glossary"?

I need Talla and Zhair'lo together again!

It was a pretty slack summer as far as the writing was concerned.

Autumn is upon us, mind, and I'm busy in that dark corner of my abode where all the good ideas chart their paths.

Cheers.

It looks like the novices begin to slowly develop naturally as soon as the drugs are discontinued, even though no one notices.

First time any author I've read on here has actually taken the time to include appendices like this.

They're rather helpful.

of one particular part of the female anatomy. Given the female protagonist starts in

boob land and the story centers from there, I take it X is a tit man, which MIGHT explain the oversight, but I'm surprised no one else has caught it.

The ass, man, the booty, the bo-dunkadunk. How could you miss the ass? LOL....

Since my BS in Sports Medicine was based the School of Physical Ed, I can tell you how important the gluteus max. med. & min., (3 butt muscles), are to the act of running.

Those girls with the leg upgrade would NEVER be elite runners without including the booty in the upgrade. Besides, think how goofy they'd look... LOL....

GeoD