All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 14'

....and it was worth the wait. Excellent!

Comes the feeling of "OH GODZ I NEED MOAR!"

True story.

I need more this is an epic tale to say the least.

I was so excited when Talla hit the target. I knew she and Zhair'lo were connected again and I hoped they would meet up!

This was so satisfying but now I need more! More of them together, asap!

Thanks for writing.

I've been waiting for this for a while now! Love it!

My only complaint is that it needs to come faster! We have waited 13 chapters for Talla and Zhairlo (Tairlo?) To be reunited, glad it finally happened.

Keep it up xtorch/xaviertorch, love the series as a whole.

I've been attempting to write a story for a year now.

I've yet to get more than a few scenes down. And it's not due to lack of time. More like a lack of concentration which my muse seems to enjoy taunting me with.

If I could catch it, I'd throttle the damn thing.

That was fantastic!

I hope I've hit a bit of a stride, writing now. Chapter 14 took me a long time to get right, so it's great that you all like it so much. I hope the rest goes more smoothly - but don't worry - I won't rush it.

Much love,

@XavierTorch

But a score of 4.97 DEFINITELY is.

It's pretty exciting to see this kind of response so quickly.

Makes it all worthwhile.

Beautiful, as always.

#2spooky4me

Seriously though great story, you could use a touch more editing just to weed out tiny mistakes like that but really, really good story I have to say