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bosbobejaanbosbobejaanover 10 years ago
Awesome

Another great chapter

xtorchxtorchover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

There was a bit of a mess getting it posted but it's all cleaned up now.

Glad you liked it.

Xav.

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 10 years ago
Curioser and curioser...

Love the intrigue. Looking forward to more answers and more Talla and Zhair'lo time.

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago
That temple is sneaky

They have been subtly pushing people where they want them to go all along! Not that he really has a choice, but what would they do if Zhair'lo decides not to be a fighter?

samsayssamsaysover 10 years ago
Excellent !!!!!

Excellent story I'm looking forward to reading more. please publish soon.

samsayssamsaysover 10 years ago
Chapter 18?

Ok so it's been 3 weeks since chapter 17 was published where is chapter 18!!!!

xtorchxtorchover 10 years agoAuthor
Chapter 18

On it's way. Just heard from my editor. Shouldn't have to wait too much longer.

IlyraIlyraover 10 years ago
Another great chapter!

Loving it! Another great chapter!

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The next chapters of "Two Hundred Dollars More" are up on the Patreon page for anyone subscribing to the $1 tier. https://www.patreon.com/xaviertorch I'm currently also working on the third novel in the Talla's Temple series. My first novel is Talla's Temple. I know, it co...

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