All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 21'

Really enjoy your story have read it all the way through and look forward to the next chapter.

Fortunately, the next chapter is nearly complete!

Hopefully, I'm on a roll.

Love the story up to this point! I'm a newcomer, I read through the entire series today. Definitely one of the better stories I have read on lit.

has me completely confused. Looking forward to seeing where you take it!

Sigh.

:-)

At least I'm throwing you off now.

So long as you're entertained, I'm pleased to know I'm writing well.

Can't wait for the next one

Excellent chapter keep writing. It seems that the women recruits have either done this before or at least told about it. They also seem to be more aroused. Chris

awsome story i am waiting for next chapter please dont be too long

Chapter 22 is out for editing and I'm writing 23!

Sorry to keep you waiting :-).

@XavierTorch

I think your writing has gotten better and better. Keep up the great work

Practice, practice, practice ... and I've had the help of two really good editors over the course of these novels.

I have read the whole series twice still waiting for next chapter please don't be long

I'm impatient

... my editor has run into some busy time. But I'm working on Chap 23 already, so hopefully those two will be close together.

Thanks for your patience.

but it is always worth it. I have also reread all the previous chapters while waiting. Please keep writing I have said many times how much I enjoy this story!!! Chris

And chapter 23 is about half way done (hard to say when I'll finish a chapter, really).

So very many plot points are going to be driven by the coming relationships!

Loving the story!

JRT