All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 22'

Glad your back! Super excited towards the direction this chapter takes the story.

great chapter we're getting closer. Please keep up the great writing. I still wonder where beshenna figures into this story except that their queen is getting weak! Chris

It's their Goddess that's getting weak.

That's going to matter ... :-)

This whole series is awesome I want to read the next chapter soon

The goddess of Gern, what happens when she has her baby???

when is the next chapter

Also waiting for the next chapter. The suspense is agonizing!!!

The wait is killing me, too.

But the chapter will be finished tonight and off for editing.

You must have a giant chart somewhere :)

I wonder if Zhair will find allies, if not among his fellow recruits then perhaps the troops.

Exhausted sex... Not appealing, yet I can see it is their way of controlling every part of the recruits lives.

Talla's insights look to have a bit more impact, though much remains to be seen there as well. Speaking of our heroine, when do we get to see her in action again?

More to the point, when do our fav couple get time again?

I know, I know... not any time soon, that's kinda the point :'(

Short, yet enjoyable chapter, thanks.

JRT

I have a great number of charts. Keeping track of clothing, people, ranks, days, nights ... you name it. It's a lot more effort, logistically, than I really expected when I started writing erotica.

But, regardless, you're welcome!