All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 25'

anticlimactic. I feel similar to Zhair'lo. I've been imagining the barbarians for so many chapters, that was quite a let down. I have to assume that there are more organized groups out there, otherwise there would be no need for the temple to fight them.

Looking forward to finding out more in the next chapter. I'm also hoping that Zhai will get a look at some of the barbarian women and realize that they have boobs etc without upgrades. That should connect some dots.

Thanks for writing.

Now back to waiting mode.

For the birth of the goddess's baby and for Talla to explore and Zhair'lo to meet the barbarians. Moving slowly forward, Facial knows about Talla but do they know everything. And what do the girls do now? What happens to barbarians and the women and children? Questions, questions,and more questions? Excellent chapter please keep them coming!!!! Chris

Good tactics - and good descriptions.

Problem though, you had the barbarians able to scout the injured woman's tracks both to and from the forest, yet she was carried out on a stretcher...

That aside, a solid chapter and addition to the story.

I'm hoping Talla - or someone - will have time for an actually enjoyable sexual escapade soon, it's been a long time since anyone had more than an abbreviated quickie :/

The story is moving at a very slow pace . Either you should increase the speed of story or increase the speed of posting chapters

I wonder if you could give the barbarian women upgrades.

Will they kill all the barbarian men?

made me realize that Beral was served by the women in order to pacify him and make him ready to accept temple life. I imagine that is what will happen to the rest of the men after they are cleaned up. I haven't figured out how they will convince the women to give up their children and begin to serve random men. Hopefully the next chapter will move us forward. The editing is taking as long as the writing. Chris

on the main path, which is where she was also put on the stretcher?