All Comments on 'Talla's Fallen Temple Ch. 30'

As promised by you this is a penultimate. But this is also a cliff hanger and again the long wait for next chapter starts. I hope you post it quickly

Have Talla and Zhair'lo had the wrong idea all this time? Interesting. I can't wait to read more!

Now I have to wait for another 2 weeks until the next chapter. LOL Fantastic chapter, but I am getting tired of painful sex. Hopefully someone gets served without pain soon. I want to hear how Talla explains her mesh with Zhair'lo to Shanata.And what will happen when his squad mates learn of his and Talla's connection? As important as Zhair'lo is to the Temple and the army's mission they don't seem to care about his health to much. Why hasn't Tia or someone from Within checked up on him to see how he is doing? He is carrying the future of the Temple in his body. They don't expect him to survive the experience so they:should be trying to make sure he makes it to Beshenna. Also if he is so important why are they letting him stand in the archery line with all the others. Where are the enforcers and Sonja?? And then, who will he give the upgrade to in Beshenna? The only queens left are Form and Abundance and one is suspected of murder, if she is even still alive. What is happening in Gern while the army is on the march? Keep writing. My standard disclaimer applies, you have more writing ability in your little finger than I have in my whole body. Chris

You are writing at the same pace George.R.R.Martin is writing winds of winter ie veory slow

When is the next chapter it's over a month now since you posted this chapter

I am glad I stayed a few chapters behind, because it made the wait more bearable. However, now I've caught up. Dealing with the wait must be similar torture to what Zhair'lo is experiencing holding all that magic. It's melodramatic, I know, but I honestly might die if I have to wait much longer!

Looking forward to more.

No update or comment from the author on the next chapter

Honest!

It's just been a very busy spring around here.

Any update on next chapter?

It's out for editing. After that, an epilogue and this novel is all done!

Sorry for the wait, but it had to be done right.

Nice story read the whole as a marathon hope to read the end soon

Is the chapter still in editing please post it soon

Not only have you ignored my self imposed 2 week deadline by months, now you claim to be able to finish Talla's and Zhair'lo's story in 1 chapter!!! I hope it's 20 or more pages long, there a lot of plot twists to tie up. Please don't let your editor take as long editing as you did writing it. As usual my standard disclaimer applies," you have more talent for writing in your little finger than I have in my whole body". Talla's story is fantastic. I hope you continue to write about her world. And how she and Zhair'lo change it for the better. Chris

So much time in editing please post soon

So much time in editing it's been almost a month now

And the epilogue is under production.

Cheers,

Xav.