All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 07'

So I've been silently following your story, and by now I gotta say this is some bold writing! There are quite a lot "otherworldly" stories I've read, but I can't recall something quite "twisting the rules" like this.

You're not painting another story on the same rectangular canvas but on an otherdimensional one.

THIS is thinking out of the box. Yeah, I love Different!

It's like losing all reference points, out of bounds.

I like the mysteries slowly uncovered here while trying to puzzle together the rules of this world.

Since it's becoming bad habit people stop writing after I scare them with my comments: Please continue this, and I'm waiting for more twists in the "rules" :)

I read all chapters and they are great!!

I really enjoy this series. I've been following it and watching for updates almost religiously. Wonderful work, please keep it going!

This whole series is really interesting. No idea where you're going or why, but keep heading there.

I love the concept of the series, with women serving men and enjoying it.

The growth part is pretty exciting to read as well.

Even the series storyline has kept me intrigued, hope you keep writing.

One point for improvement would be a slightly better demarcation between different viewpoints.

Well done.

very meshy

It is obvious that you were already a writer before you started taking us on this erotica interdimensional journey. Many must be too busy reading and whatnot to comment.

I still read all of the comments and appreciate people who take the time to write to me.

I'll start on the third book of Talla's Temple once I'm done Two Hundred Dollars.

Cheers,

Xav.