All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 08'

Great mix of erotic scenes and interesting history.

It was bugging me the first few chapters, but it seem's you've started seperating chatacter's P.O.V. now. It was disorienting when there was no clear indication of a switch in perspective. Glad to see the change, Here's hoping your technique as a writer continues to improve as I move on to the rest of the 'first book'.

Good story also, it reminds me of 'The Preacher Man', though I have no idea which story came first.

An unusual, perhaps enlightening argument for domination of males by females. Being male I don't buy it. Queens have about the same history as Kings in using war to solve problems. Unless everybody is peaceful you still need an army or police force to handle situations where peace has left the building. Making the army female has some questions. Genetics (natural selection) seems to make men better adapted to fighting. Particularly with swords, bows, other hand to hand combat tools. More upper body strength. Why not just make the generals or officers female?

awesome, amazing, addictive. Thanks!

Very interesting. Bing reading this story and enjoying it full