All Comments on 'Talla's Temple Ch. 24'

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Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Homonym Police

On page two "Miksa couldn't bare it." She could, she probably was naked. Likely you meant she couldn't bear it. Two hours of community service writing another chapter.

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