All Comments on 'Talon Ch. 02'

by Dark_Angel1

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Black TulipBlack Tulipover 17 years ago
Yesss!

This is shaping up like a good story.

Just don't let it end too soon, please?

Black Tulip

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
A vast improvement over the last chapter.

Hats off to the author and the new editor. A few of the questions posed by readers from the first chapter were answered here, and the technical aspects were near flawless. Found the pace to be much better, as well.

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