All Comments on 'Tami Ch. 03'

Absolutely one hot series that I hope continues. I do caution though in this one I found some errors in proof reading. Other than that hot as hell, looking forward to part 4

I can't wait for the next episode. I hope they get a little orgy going with Brit, Mom, Thomas, Jace, and Tami. What a blast.

this is a fanfukintastic story. Im so glaed you had 7 pages here. its so good you just dont want to wait for the next chapter to come out lol. ty/ bill

This has been a great story and all ,, the ,, you no all and a million times over is getting old and very fucking stale

Good story, keep it in the same line.

I will react to a comment from Romantic1 (I hope they get a little orgy going with Brit, Mom, Thomas, Jace, and Tam).

You have the pseudo Romantic, do you know what it is. And do you know privacy. Jace can share with his sister about his mom, but not with other.

That can be private only with the family, because it's about people you love.

Brit and Tami are intimate, Jace and Thomas are accomplice they can have sex in front of other with their partners.

But it's not a reason, Jace must share all his secret with other.

If he shares this secret with Tami, only by respect and love for her and also to let his mom knows about his relationship with Tami.

Show really you deserve this pseudo Romantic, otherwise change it to Pervert.

AWESOME story...can't wait for the next installment!

This story was just so unexpected, I almost didn't believe it. Sure, I expected that Jason would have sex with his mother. That was set up by the massage in Chapter 2.

But Lisa's vaginal massage almost made me blow. This is superb craftsmanship in writing erotica, believabilty issues notwithstanding. And Tami's and Brittany's vaginal massages are yet to come. Oh my!!

One note to TomWine before you post any future installments. You need better proofreading. There is a "have" where you meant "gave." You refer once to Brittany as Bethany. There are other examples throughout the first three chapters. They are minor irritants, but they are there and they annoy. You are too good a writer to let such things detract from your work.

Finsh the next chapter already

I love the story and the characters. I loved the lil' sis series until the male/male interactions and am worried about how the Jace / Thomas storyline is going to develop. Keep up the good work.

... God.

Please write at least a few more chapters to this story....

More please

Don't stop!! I want to hear more about Thomas & Jason!!!

There is so much that you haven't finished on this one... What happens with Mom??? What happens with Brittany and Tami??? One HOT story...

Add another vote to the list: Please, more....

Don't allow Thomas to have anything special with Tami if you make another part. Also don't allow Jason to have anything special with Brittney. The story is great, but please be careful.

This is the second of your brilliant stories that still need an ending. It's 2 years since you wrote chapter 3, but I'm still hoping you finish this and Cassie's story as well.

I know there can be numerous reasons why authors don't complete their stories, but if you do read this, please finish both these stories, they both deserve to have closure.

I loved this and gave it 5 stars, but as a reader it would be good to read how YOU want it to finish.

If you were to write more stories on the same theme as the four you have already done, I for one won't complain !

Thanks for a great read - so far !

Finishing a sentence with 'and all' is annoying and stupid. STOP IT!

This was great rig ht up to the point where you got Thomas involved with Tami. Yes OK he found out about them but not to the point it starts interfering with the love for each other. I jumped from the page from that first incident to the end to see what happens and didn't like it at all. Thought this was supposed to be about the love of siblings not with everyone else. Fraud I can't rate this. It upset me how things went.

That was a smoking hot story. You need to finish it.

You really can't leave this u Fi is he'd, it's far too good to stop in the middle.

PLEASE - finish it !

P.S. I wish I'd had a sister like Tami...............!

It needs a great finish.

Ive ony read a few stories like yours that was well laid out and not jumbled up. It all flkwed very nicely till the end where you left your readers hanging. You really need to take this one to a happy ending so get a move on please. As one of the comments I read, I would like to see more interaction with the mother and see how it plays out.

Thanks for the excellent read

Sunchaser796

Why do a lot of authors always have some stranger involved with they're mom sister whatever.Also what is with the gay shit but all said well crafted story.

I love this story and every inch of it,

please do not stop posting those stories

please give this another chapter

I've got no problem with LGBTQ+ shit or swingers or whatever the hell, but why are so many authors reluctant to just let two people have a story to themselves? Chapter 1 was a great story, one of the top 50 on this website even. Was just continuing that story too much to ask? The writing is technically fine, which earns you two stars, but the story loses you the three others chapter 1 got.

Dialog needs to be worked on. Very weak.

I enjoyed this story until coming to manager inviting assistant manager to double up on massage. I did not read after that. Why is it that other people need to become part of a true love story between a brother and sister. When that happens it goes from true love to an orgy.

THIS IS THE THIRD SERIES YOU WROTE THAT HAS POOR ENDINGS. "BROOKE" WAS YOUR BEST STORY BUT THE SUDDEN DEATH OF BROOKE WAS JUST TOO OVER THE TOP FOR A ROMANCE STORY LINE. ALL THREE STORY SERIES ARE, IN MY VIEW ARE UNFINISHED. THEY ARE GOOD STORIES THAT NEED GOOD ENDING. SINCE IT HAS BEEN 5 PLUS YEARS AND NO FURTHER WRITINGS HAVE COME FROM YOU, I'M GUESSING YOU HAVE RETIRED. YOUR READER

It would have been nice if mother, son and daughter would have gotten together and shown there love for each other and fucked each others brains out . It just seems the story ended to soon. Please continue with further loving within their family.

This story was not a very good one ,, it started out good and crashed from there ,, you bring a second main character in and the sister hits on him and then the brother is like ,, so what ,, then the sister teasing and playing with him in the car ride home,,, and then you make the sister into a bi girl and the swapping of sperm between the two girls,, and then kisses to the boys,,,while stiff having some in there mouth,, yuck ,, you turned a love story into an orgy for sharing the massages 🤦🏼‍♂️🤦🏼‍♂️🤦🏼‍♂️🤦🏼‍♂️

I am glad that this story line just stopped,, thank you for that

That's it??? No ending!!!! You suck for not continuing this story!¡ 2 thumbs down!!