All Comments on 'Tangea Ch. 01'

it was great, can't wait to read more

I look forward to reading more, and I hope the subsequent chapters are much longer. This one barely covered introductions before you left us hanging at the end. I realise this sounds harsh but when your just getting into the story and then the chapter ends, well I'm sure you get what I'm saying.

Very interesting start and would love to read more.

Donna.

Keep it up l9ve to read more

Thanks

So far, an awsome story... ready for more.