All Comments on 'Tangential'

Yes, I will make your day, because you made my whole weekend.

By the way should I try writing an erotic fantasy??

Very hot! Nice work.

I can only imagine....

Beautifully written and thoroughly erotic.

Love erotic inner dialogue like this -- and you're good at it!

Ms. Just to clarify, You don't need to ask, your thoughts every man's wood would luv.

Love how you conveyed her imagination. Very imaginative writing.

A wonderful erudite piece of interior monologue that explores many tangents with a good creative use of language and many erotic and humorous images such as Matt with 'a tent in his pants'. Your female narrator is a clever voyeur and presents a delightful point of view. A very enjoyable read.

Robertodavo aka Robert Davidson.

Naughty. Sexy. Clever. Thanks.