All Comments on 'Tangled Woven Red Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Tangled Woven Red.

A great start to a lovely story, -- BUT -- it needs " fleshing out, !!.

More detail and longer episodes, ?.

NC22371NC22371over 9 years ago
I concur...

Size matters, great start, but give some more weight to the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
BEEN WAITING FOR YOUR SEQUEL

ARE YOU STILL WRITING?

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