All Comments on 'Tara'

snoozer...get to the point.

where the hell is the begining of the story ths reads like the middle. no body wants to start reading a story from the middle. delete and start over from the begining and use a good editor.

the other two are right this story sucks, it jumps all over the place is boring as hell and you give no background or character development in any way. you wasted your time our time and the sites space

the others said most of what I feel but I also feel there is no place in the incest area for rape or talk about rape that is what the nonconsent area is for.