All Comments on 'Tara: The Beginning'

Your story repeated itself for a couple of paragraphs. Hopefully it wasn’t anything important that was missed. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Please more pages xx a very good start

Ow yes please write more

you need someone to check for grammatical errors and spelling mistakes. It's a great beginning, but the errors are distracting.

Well written, a few issues towards end, as previously commented, but story was hot, left me wanting more...and more...