All Comments on 'Target Acquired - #01 Allison'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good job!

I enjoyed this entry and am looking forward to more from you.

skywriterxxxskywriterxxxover 13 years ago
Very well done!

Great first story, well written with a great theme. Hoping to see more work from this author. You've come up with a gold mine of a storyline!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Dismally written

Sort yourself out.

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