All Comments on 'Tart Ch. 01'

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Leto DegeneresLeto Degeneresabout 15 years ago
Very good!

Okay, your stuff has me rethinking loving wives! This is what I like. These stories just make you feel good, you know?

oldbearswitcholdbearswitchalmost 7 years ago
Pretty good story. Dropped a point BC she wanted the neighbor to cheat

You had a nice con-sensual theme going, then added that low life cheating crap. Duh

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
STORYTELLING TALENT...

Some have it.

Some do not.

ZotDragon has it,

causing me to enjoy

the story and

the storytelling.

Paul in Oklahoma

26thNC26thNCalmost 2 years ago

Whore tries to get another woman to cheat.

mistimksmistimks8 months ago

"cum laughed"

Serviceable story, thank you for sharing it, but you are bad at tags.

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