All Comments on 'Tarzan's Release'

I love the story. But it was much to short.

Can't wait to read part 2

It got me started then nothing. Left high and dry. Surely hope there is more coming, or is that cumming?

I was in to it for the most part but the ending was abrupt and arbitrary let?s have an ending not a rap up

,,,From Tarzan to Santa Clause next year !!! Hey,there is some action missing befor you wrote them last lines...

you set up a good premise and slightly developed the charactors...then you left out the erotica. Was this on purpose or are you too embarrased to write it?

I am sorry but this has got to be the worst thing I have ever red here on the is site. Story starts all right but is cut off at the knees.

You need to try harder.. This need a lot of work. I gave you a ( 1 ) on it It's sucks

i didnt evan cum at all my pussy was thinking he was going to cum inside his daughters cunt but that was the worst story i ever read in my life fuck it sucked

Started well but then rushed to a fnish. It could have been quite good but you just

really rushed the ending. it's like you just

orgasmed prematurly and decide it was time for you to roll over and

go to sleep.

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extremely strong & i've absolutely loved almost thee entire thing +

i've mean almost thee entire thing {but} [but] (but) when you got

to the end you killed the entire story --- what happened to ANGIE

\ what happened to --- THE FATHER & THE DAUGHTER `supposed

to not know it was really each other` / what happened to --- the two

them *or* the three them literally romping the hell outta each other in

that back room ||| there's alot more that was wrong imma stop right there

Unreadable drivel