All Comments on 'Taste of Mom Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More chapters

If its a boy he wont have the same hair color,

when you spell cum its not come,

Pat Nurray

Atlanta.

Alvaron53Alvaron53over 17 years ago
Maybe when s/he spells "cum"...

"when you spell cum its not come"

Actually, it is. "cum" is a Latin word that means "with". In English slang, the term for reaching sexual climax is spelled "coming" with present tense "come", participle "coming" and past tense "came". Or perhaps the previous poster believes that "cummed" is more appropriate than "came"?

Tolerably good story. When you're bored sometime, do a precis on it. Nothing teaches precision and brevity better.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
wtf

what the fuck the tag line for your story "TASTE OF MOM CH.04"says "siblings bond forever" yet there are no siblings in the story keep things straight if you aren't smart enough to know what you are doing then stop writting

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