by RejectReality
That was great! I think Jason needs to continue to sample the fruits of Sherry. More please!
Very Very Very Good. Cougars are great and cougars you know are even better. cant wait for part 2
I really enjoyed your story and hope you add more to it.
Oh, these young guys: they all seem to be so informed on pleasuring a woman. Sigh. Lovely.
I notice you never write a chapter 2 for your stories but you should for this story!
I'm actually writing my first continuation of a story now, although I won't be posting it to Lit. I just don't think that what I'm writing has enough plot to validate posting as a "chapter 2" here. I'm going to keep these "just more sex" stories on my website.
If that's the kind of thing you're looking for, it might just be coming ;)
If anything ever does have enough substance ( as if my stories have much to begin with LOL ) to warrant chapter 2 status, I'll put it up here. Do feel free to suggest continuations in the comments. The more call there is to read further adventures from the characters in a story, the more likely I am to read back through it looking for inspiration.
This one is actually on my list already. I have a hottie I know who is fluent in both Spanish and English to double check any Spanish lines I want to put in, so I can actually spice a continuation up a little.
love the way you build your story hope keep up the good work if you do it will keep me up toooooooooooooooooooo
good dialogue, good fucking, a nice bit of humor. Just one thing....she was lying about having her tubes tied right?
So yummy; sequel would be nice but not necessary, we get the picture .. DKP
You're an english professor at some prestigious university, with a desire ( and a talent ) to write novels. I haven't checked to see if you have more offerings, but I will now ! Please write more !
Gave it a 5.
Love that hair.
Sherry seemed like an honest and well written character.
Well written. Nice buildup. Very erotic. Sherry's a well-developed character, more so than Jake.
I'd like to see a sequel.
You write superbly. The scenes are amazing. Scent, sight, taste. Elements ignored by lesser writers. She should have had him spread those delicious ass cheeks and sniff, lick, suck and tongue fuck her dirty bunghole until she orgasmed.
This has ben one of the more diskiptive storys I have read. you are a outstanding writer I hope you make a second ch. of this story about how they end up and how far things go for them . I give this a 10
when I was younger .. my friends mothers and their friends would tease me about things they had heard. Sometimes their curiosity would allow us to spend some time together and then as women do, they would talk together. I wouldn't say I was passed around but there is a real difference between the girls who were my age and the "older" women I spent time with that I appreciated. I remember very fondly the hours spent with experienced women who were willing to do anything I wanted. Now that I'm older I realize that they were in their prime years. Pleasant memories, hmm.
it's amazing what a person will put themselves through in the throws of passion...going down on a woman, your tongue about to fall off, your fingers tired from pumping them in her while licking and sucking, your neck at a really weird angle, the vice grips from the thighs and you can't even breath sometimes.......
Nicely done. I like that Sherry has a bush, too. The "fake tits, shaved pussy" look has gotten really old. I see your comment about sequels is about nine years old. If you're still getting these comments, more would be welcome, though after all this time, I'm doubtful.,
Quite plausible younger men always desire older women. Thanks for not reducing yourself to the length of your penis.