All Comments on 'Tasting Salt'

I like the characters. They are really hot together. Kiara is an alpha woman. I'd like to see if Ben could handle her while more develops between them even as they try to keep their liaison a secret from her Dad. The possibilities are endless. The tone and pacing of the story is great too.

I hope you decide to do more chapters. I'm really intrigued by Kiara, Ben, her friends and Dad.

I know for a fact that there are others who would be on a second chapter in a heartbeat. I'm so glad you're allowing comments.

Nice.

Wish it were a series;)

Afro racist crap.

Good and strong writing here. Seriously needs a follow-up round. If you're not able to do it, send it into the Chain Stories; I might have a shot at this one.

Seriously. Excellent work.

second chapter please!

My.panties.are.soaked!!! from reading this.

Please continue. The best part was at the end, when she tortures him while he's on the phone with her dad! EXCELLENT haha

I love thisss.

You should make this a series. <3

That was too fucking hot! Why did it have to end? I know it's been awhile but I totally want an update!

-Bizzy

do guys really like it when a girl is a bitch to them like that? but oh, i guess that is same as do girls really like it when a guy is a jerk to them. Not questioning or criticising your story but did make me think about exactly what it is that makes it attractive for either sex in either scenario. As for this story, hot stuff, forbidden fruit indeed lol

She's so wrong for setting him up like that

Super fun!