All Comments on '"Tattooed people are dirty"'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
VERY NICELY WRAPPED AND CLOSED

You wrote all those female clues so well that I could not help but smile. Nicely ended too.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
tpad

Ha ha.

Good!

tangledweedtangledweedalmost 6 years ago
It's one thing to fuck the mother,

...but bailing on your fireteam is just low.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good but too short.

Its pretty decent but it could use a continuation with more sex between them and the bitchy wife changing to completely enthralled with the guy.

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