All Comments on 'Tawny Ch. 03'

...who is confused by the sequence of this story? The story is being written in the first person, but it seems to be more about Tawny than anyone else, she is the only constant character in the story. The first chapter had her with Gary Green, the latest chapter with Mr. Philips, So one has to wonder why is it being written in the first person? Am I missing something? Will you please clarify? Thanks

I've only read a few of your stories so far and I do try to always comment on each when I read a story. One of the things I love is your sense of humor. I've got to tell U that when you mentioned the inhaler...if I'd been wearing panties I might have wet them I laughed so hard!! Truly truly funny. I had a perfect mental image of that. I plan to send U a personal message about the writing portion. Keep email coming.

It should have said keep em coming not keep email coming. UGH! Sorry

Like "Am I (Anon)", took awhile to notice these guys were not same; but just a type. Tawny is turning into an Everyman fantasy. For all us guys who wanna believe a sweet young thing might look our way--at least in our daydreams!!