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Click here"Same time tomorrow?" She whispered. He smiled and she kissed his lips again and slunk from the room with a satisfied grin on her pretty face.
The switching from first to third person didn't make sense.
if he was really bothered as you say then it seems he would have found a way to avoid and ignore her until he could catch his plane. as is it just crys STUPID and UNREALISTIC.
if he was uncomfortable around her after the trip home and especially after the incident in the kitchen he sure would hang around her he would avoid her at all costs possibly going to a friends house until his flight way to unrealistic and the jumping from one point of view to another was very distracting you get a 2 out of 5 just for knowing how to turn on the computer
DBRS