by bellydance
Bellydance,
You do have a way of playing a story in C Natural. Every word of the garden conversations was believable. You have the unique knack of taking a short story and making it appear larger than it really is just by the way you write. Being somewhat long-winded in my writing, Sir - I am in Awe!
I love the delightful little conventions that couples sometimes use when playing with each other.
Boyd
"Stick him in": That lovely moment when, as big and tight as a drum,he is about to enter between the vaginal lips, to slide into the corridor of love and, his foreskin tickled to the final frenzy of love, to touch as deeply into her physical being as it is possible to reach - those are the lovely moments which this little story recalls. So sweetly realistic, such lovely memories...