All Comments on 'Teach or Taught? Ch. 01'

by Deceitful

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
This story has potential

But in my opinion you use to many sexual cliches. Man juice and such is just not needed (my opinion). Also, consider using an editor.

I look forward to the following chapters.

don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Good, but could have been better

Looking forward to reading future chapters of this clearly fantasy story. Unless 'teach' is trying to go to jail for raping one of her subjects, this does not happen in real life.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great

looking forward to more !!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
A better attempt if this is first

A short but complete sex story and I hope future ones would be more polished.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Not bad

I really liked it. It was built up rather well and they way Michael seduced his teacher was very wicked of him. The fact that Natasha was an English teacher made me giggle too, because the majority of my English teachers have been women and all of them where gorgeous.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
you started a good story,now finish it

what taking so long for chapter2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
FUCK YOU

THIS WAS FUCKING HORRIBLE!!!!!!

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