by Xesevoli
That was sizzliing!! Pity that you've already closed it and moved on .. would have loved more!!
I felt like this was very effective, but it still could have used dialogue to express the thoughts and feelings of the characters. Very good!
yes a bit of dialogue would have helped but otherwise a beautiful story and well written
I really enjoyed this story. That poor man, my heart goes out to him. I know what rape is and she let him believe that's what he did.