by StoryTeller07
All you women are weak and their sexual needs override their feeble brains. So unrealistic. All your men are sweet but want to treat their women as submissive sluts. Not a gentleman amongst them. You stories are all the same. You clearly have a thing for foolish oversexed educators. I find your stories frustratingly degrading of women. You can have erotic stories without the women being weak minded fools who can't think when aroused. Too bad you are a chauvinist.
First part gr8t second part in the pool hall made me blood boill for wat she gets in two and there are lost off guys like that sik sobs sadly
I agree too bad his portrayal of submissive women is so unrealistic it even makes them look strong willed the women portrayed here are not even subs just frightened(often blackmailed) women who are manipulated in ways that betray the men as chauvinist cowards rather than dominants its too bad the authors description isn't bad and his pacing is decent he really just needs to try new material
Submissive women are not this common. Women who have earned degrees and entered the world of educators don't come off sounding like horny wanton teenagers seeking praise of the worst examples of men. Not one man in this story qualifies as a man. Although you have the talent to be a good writer, your story content is woefully lacking. It reads as though written by an over-sexed teenager.
I like the imagination here. More chapters left. Not your typical teacher in trouble story.