by StoryTeller07
I've never read such a crap ! If you're, as it seems, a stupid teenager, go back to school !
Yes, the scenario is tried and true, but it is still fun to read and imagine where it is going. Nothing brand new at this point, but hopeful. Sirik is a nice add.
Go f_ _ _ yourself and find out the meaning of fiction. Story teller use her mind, body and soul to extreme degeneration! Have fun spinning this new tale.
I hope he doesn't pimp her out. it would be ok one time to share her as a test of his domination, but after that it would just be sad. and sad is not hot.
Sad, sadistic, bad, wrong headed, red hearings, dead ends, are all a part of a fantasy story. A fantasy that a character wouldn't want to submit to, but in thought it turns her on - for example, the pimping scene in this chapter. Like the readers of these stories, you don't want it to happen in real life, but as a naughty fantasy, its OK. In a story bad things have to happen, to make the good things even better. That mirrors real life, even If the plot could never mirror the story, it would be too awful. I know you know this, just thought I'd reassure you for chapter 4.
really really enjoyed this story. Very well written. Please continue this story soon!
More and hopefully you will delve into her daytime work submission!
i'd really like to hear about her humiliation at school but id defs prefer her rented than sold.