by StoryTeller07
I just logged on hoping for an update and you delivered!
Aside from a few typos, the story is progressing nicely, with just enough action and excitement. I hope you write for many years to come.
It was a long chapter so quite an effort to edit it. When reading it on Litorotica I saw them, so will update the chapter as soon as possible.
Thanks for writing. Wondering what Hollie's fate will be. Hope it takes as long as you want to find out!
Thanks again, Storyteller for the exciting story. Looking for continuation.p.
This is starting to wear thin now need more public humiliation,
Make her go shopping for new cloths where she will get noticed with masters marks,
"16 part series"? Good news: continuation promised, bad news, not more than two. When are you publishing the next chapter? p.
Not well so writing slowed down. Another week and it will be completed. Other stories are in planning stage, so this series will be halted for awhile, after chapter 15.
do you know when you plan to post the next chapter? email me when you do at.. amywow019@ymail.com
Still in the beginning of chpt 15, I've enjoyed this series so far, with both main characters newly exploring their dom/sub relationship. I believed Roger's 'love' for Hollie was sincere, however, I don't understand the necessity or reasoning for handing over all of the documents for 'Cindy' to Nathaniel for just a brief trip.... and all the detailed infor....I am doubting his love for her as anything more than a possession...and I don't understand Hollie's desire to remain under his influence with that knowledge.