by StoryTeller07
Been busy, so it took a long time to get this chapter out. It was supposed to tie everything together, but didn't work out that way. It means another long chapter to complete the series.
A few more of these chapters would be great!
The only problem I have with it right now is the fact that she would walk around without noticing that her skirt is up. The rest was good.
I like the plot twists. Am I the only one rooting for her to escape?
I got confused when you added nathanial. I had to read that part a couple times.
I look forward to see the next episode!
great twist bt dnt keep the suspence long for next chapter...although an excellent story
i'm with gumby, rooting for her escape....roger does not love her and her life is in his immature control. why should she ever apologize for not wearing panties when he's the one who dresses her?! why does he get off on punishing her for being naughty in situations he set her up in?! i am fearful for the 'auction' because i have no trust for roger to protect her.
She should have kept going and not stayed he don't love her at all. And the girl got what she deserved anyway for treating Hollie bad